Supporting Details in Writing

Introduction

• Main Idea: A paragraph starts with a main idea (topic sentence), followed by supporting details to develop the point.
• Analogy: Main point = tabletop; Supporting details = table legs.

Types of Supporting Details

1. Descriptions
   • Use of five senses, comparison, and metaphors to create vivid images.
2. Vocabulary
   • Clarification through definitions to avoid reader confusion.
3. Proof
   • Hard evidence such as facts, statistics, and dates.
4. Voices
   • Expert quotes, opinions, and different perspectives as soft proof.
5. Explanation
   • Simplification of the main point.
6. Importance
   • Answers the 'so what?' after presenting facts or quotes.

Example: "Being a Celebrity is Difficult"

• Main Point: Celebrities face challenges.
• Supporting Details:
  • Quote from Perez Hilton on privacy sacrifice.
  • Descriptive examples like paparazzi photos.
  • Possible testimonial (proof-based detail) on celebrity danger.

Writing Tips

• Focus:
  • Stay close to the main point.
  • Each paragraph should relate back to the overall thesis.
  • Avoid unrelated examples.
  • Use specific details to maintain interest.
• Avoid Vague Details:
  • Vague details weaken the argument (like a thin table leg).
  • Specific details strengthen the writing.

Example on Specificity

• Vague: "I felt like I was sick."
• Specific: "I felt a tickle in my throat, started to cough, had a fever, and shivered in bed."

Conclusion

• Supporting details are crucial for strengthening main points.
• They should be specific, creative, and focused.
• Improved writing through strong supporting details.

• Goal: Enhance writing skills by effectively using supporting details.