Overview
The text explains Donald M. Murray's view on internal revision in writing, highlighting the need for self-reflection and clarity during rewriting.
The Nature of Internal Revision
- Internal revision means rereading and rethinking to clarify your own ideas.
- It’s about discovering what you want to say, not just fixing mistakes.
- Writers often find new meaning or direction at this stage.
- This process is private and happens before getting feedback from others.
Approaches to Effective Internal Revision
- Step back from your draft to see it with fresh eyes.
- Ask yourself questions about your intent and audience.
- Reread aloud or set the work aside for a while.
- Use this stage to experiment and take risks.
Differences from External Revision
- Internal revision is about self-discovery; external revision is about responding to others’ feedback.
- Focusing on grammar too soon can block deeper improvements.
Benefits of Internal Revision
- Leads to clearer, more meaningful writing.
- Increases personal investment and satisfaction.
Recommendations for Writers
- Spend time on internal revision before seeking outside input.
- Focus on what you’re learning about your topic, not just corrections.
- See internal revision as essential for authentic writing.