Analysis of the Poem 'Touch' by Hugh Lewin
About the Poet
- Hugh Lewin (1939-2019): South African poet
- Anti-Apartheid activist
- Imprisoned as a political prisoner (1964-1971), spent 7 years in jail
- Imprisoned for resisting the Apartheid regime
Title: 'Touch'
- Simple and singular, focuses on the word 'Touch'
- Connotations:
- Positive: loving, caring, essential for human development (e.g., skin-to-skin contact with newborns)
- Negative: invasive, unwanted, inhumane
Stanza 1
- Content:
- The speaker dreams of being touched gently and slowly when he gets out of prison
- Emphasis on learning how life feels again through positive touch
- Key Points:
- Use of 'when' indicates optimism and hope
- First-person pronoun 'I' adds sincerity and authenticity
- Desperation for positive human connection emphasized by repetition of 'touch me'
- 'I want' shows deep desire for positive touch
- Enjambment and indent convey sincerity and honesty
Stanza 2
- Content:
- Reflects on not being touched for seven years and feeling 'untouchable'
- Key Points:
- Personal pronoun 'I' and conversational tone
- Words like 'untouched,' 'out of touch,' and 'untouchable' emphasize isolation and dehumanization
- 'Untouchable' refers to his low status in society as a prisoner
Stanza 3
- Content:
- Describes being touched by 'things' rather than people, highlighting inhumane treatment
- Key Points:
- Harsh C sounds indicate brutality
- Counting negative experiences suggests deep scars and negative bias
- 'Things' rather than people underline inhumane treatment
Stanza 4
- Content:
- Lists the forms of abuse, focusing on fists and the violence endured
- Key Points:
- 'One' and colon introduce the list of abuses
- Diction of 'fists' suggests aggression and dehumanization
- Repetition and use of transferred epithet ('fierce mad fists') emphasize brutality
- Use of 'screaming' and pleading shows the intense suffering
Stanza 5
- Content:
- Describes four years of daily searches and loss of privacy
- Key Points:
- Terms like 'patting paws' and 'searching' indicate invasiveness and lack of privacy
- Parenthesis (arms up, shoes off, legs apart) lists demeaning actions
- 'Systematic, heavy, indifferent' describes the emotionless and invasive touch
Stanza 6
- Content:
- Speaker expresses longing to be touched in a positive way again
- Highlights the need for human connection and wanting to feel alive
- Key Points:
- Sincere statement rejecting negative touch and pleading for positive human touch
- Equates touch with feeling alive
- Ends with a Proclamation of wanting to be positively touched when freed
Structure of the Poem
- Free Verse: No set rhyme scheme, free flow of thoughts
- Enjambment: Adds to the sense of sincerity and honesty
- Irony: Free writing vs. lack of personal freedom
- Short, Fragmented Lines: Unsettling and unfree feeling
Tone and Mood
- Tone: Desperate, sincere, pleading, heartfelt, honest
- Mood: Desperation, longing
Themes and Messages
- Human connection
- The importance of physical touch
- Types of touch: positive and negative
- Imprisonment and dehumanization
- Understanding what life truly means
Conclusion
- Emphasizes the significance of humane and positive touch
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