latest video um thank you for getting this far so I feel like we are so almost done I really want to get this finalized I want to get it um out there and on the website so super eager to get this s of resolved and finished um Mike has been slack I'm getting the recording but he's going to do that today so hopefully you'll have that so it's really only the first little bit of the video that I need to dissect a little bit but um and I'm I know this wasn't your final edit and you just quickly put it together so I could have something the other day but um these are my final bits of feedback so let's go I love that opening I love those gum leaves love the Mist I think that really interacts with the whole thing don't like that screen see how it just went really quickly from there this screen here is um irrelevant let's get rid of it love the leaves really interacts with it very good uh you can see that little quick like edit there it just like irrelevant needs to get there okay so um the fruit and vegetables flying down here in the background doesn't make any sense because we're actually proom this is that would make more sense if it was chemicals like um toxic chemicals like round up or glyat or any sort of chemical bodies but um does make sense that it's fruit and vegetable I mean this back this scene here it just doesn't seem to make sense I just think you should get rid of it from the intro like um we can do a much better food orientated image there than Mike with bees and money it just it just is doesn't quite make sense I mean here you could have food fall onto Mike's lap or you could have food fall around him healthy looking food like covering Mike that would make more sense so I mean here is talking about toxic foods so the background should probably have a bit more toxicity going on whether we have someone spraying again or they're just look like monoculture crops or um just some new image with toxic food I feel this this slide I think it's good it's just so out of alignment with the rest of the animation like it looks like real grass and cows versus the rest it just is not as consistent I you could have some butterflies or something roaming around him I mean you could have a A cocko or a Gala Land Land on The Veranda or on somewhere that's all good all right this one scene here it's I've had a million people tell me this so I have to pass it on okay when it says bu diversity is linked to gr drought there shouldn't be any water basically if your farm is holding that much water you wouldn't be in drought there'd be greenness growing so we have to here get rid of the water in this scene it's a great scene but we need to get rid of the water or make it like tiny little puddles love this this is great great great yeah all right so I I like that we've expanded the water here but actually you still need to have we still need to show that the water is being sucked up through the soil so I still want water left around it but I want the water to also be sucked up so your original um illustration where the water was being sucked up and the plants were going was really good we just wanted to add a little bit more water to it great love the sound effect all right so I can see that you put heat small worms in really excellent but we need some really big ones you need to give me some 12in worms just to make the point they just need to be massive worms lots of little ones but also some massive worms all good all good love the frogs all good much better be or good yep all good oh good oh good oh good yep that's good great good Improvement on the dung beetles yep good yep good yep all right this looks way better yep good I really like the Gass in this scene I think you should try to bring them into the rest of the film somewhere it's good good yep yeah yep yep all right perfect so you can see that the majority of this of the edits are in the first section that's the bit that we need to work on um and then just that removing the water from the drought scene and adding um some bigger worms to the worm scene and getting that sore sponge reducing in water and it's all pretty good man you were almost done we're almost done so um I'm really super eager to get this resolved and finalized so I will harass Mike to today to get you the audio and um well done everyone I'm also super Keen to send everyone a thank you t-shirt from carbonate here in Australia um in which case I need your sizes and whoever is involved in working on this amazing animation we really appreciate it and we just are really loving this whole experience so thank you everyone