time check it's english o'clock [Music] english teacher nihuwan [Music] hi there our target most essential learning competency for today's lesson is compose an argumentative essay sigurado comes after but first let us define argumentative and essay separately the word argumentative is defined as having or showing a tendency to disagree or argue ibig sabihin paksina being argumentative means a short piece of writing on a particular subject putting these two together argumentative essay is a kind of writing that aims to make the reader agree with the writer's opinion about a controversial or a debatable issue ebik sabihin kapalpina sulatkani teacher in an argumentative essay about a controversial or debatable issue and your goal is to convince the readers opinion and in the same manner you now let's say an italian issue malacanang told mayors to follow the priority list for the coronavirus disease 2019 or kovid19 vaccination sinabihan and those include of course our frontliners and senior citizens what is your stand on the issue you only have to choose between the two agree or disagree if you agree with the issue let's have this as your claim or thesis statement mayors should not skip the covid19 vaccine line since they are not in the priority list on the other hand and if you happen to disagree with the issue let's have this as your claim or thesis statement mayors should also be prioritized for vaccination so they could influence their constituents to get vaccinated as well remember you only have to take one side choose only one between the two claims and this is actually the first step in developing your argumentative essay you have to formulate your claim or argument on the issue now let's say you already have your claim or argument mayor should not skip the kovit 19 vaccine line since they are not in the priority list the next thing you will do is to support your claim by providing evidence it could be from your prior knowledge or personal experiences predicating interviewing experts to get their opinion about the issue for example angisa health related so you can interview doctors or nurses [Music] about education you can interview dependent officials or teachers and also you may consult reliable books and articles in print or online but again make sure that these materials are from reliable sources because when you write an essay it should be based on facts so there nasa step 2 look for evidence to support your claim or argument [Music] claim or argument [Music] now you are ready to write your essay argumentative essay basically has three parts the introduction body and conclusion so the introduction you may introduce the issue you can also give background information and also you have to state your claim or these statement usually italian last sentence introductory paragraph idiom claim or stand modern remember next le man is body body you have you have the presenter evidence to present your evidence magbibi cannon reasons to support your stand and elaborate them when you do this you can already make one paragraph for each reason if you can provide three or more reasons to support your claim the better later i'll show you a sample argumentative essay for you to easily determine its parts but also you have to take note of this number one each paragraph must contain one reason and its supporting details number two the supporting details may include examples statistics personal experiences or quotations just like what i mentioned earlier data may come from your personal experiences or through experts opinion or reliable sources like books books and articles again let me reiterate hindi pueden mag in benton data part dinner body of your essay on counter claim and rebuttal this part may be written as another paragraph so comment on three evidence equivalent to three paragraphs this one is the fourth anub young counter claim the ebay already formulated your claim or thesis statement so the counter claim is the opposite this is the opposing argument sepanzula casino argumentative essay it is not only how well you defend your stand but you also have to cite the opposing argument then refute it let's have this example so again this is your claim mayor should not skip the covet 19 vaccine line since they are not in the priority list if this is your stand on the issue of course against dinaman's opinion now this is the counter claim or opposing argument others might say that mayors should also get vaccinated as they are influencers [Music] that is termed as rebuttal or to make it simple so your bottle here is but due to the limited supply of kovi 19 vaccines frontline workers and the most vulnerable must still be prioritized going back to the parts of an argumentative essay proceed the mantis a conclusion your conclusion which is the last paragraph can include a general statement that supports your claim or thesis statement means a negligible quotation and call to action but not being called to action this is a statement that challenges the readers to respond or to do something we are now in the last step step 3 write your agreementative essay following this format i will now present another issue the public display industry keeps many species of marine mammals captive in concrete tanks especially whales and dolphins this issue actually is one of the major concern in america cassisa america mammals such as whales and dolphins are ginagamet for entertainment shows before we proceed let me remind you again of the steps in writing your argumentative essay step 1 formulate your claim or argument step 2 look for evidence to support your claim or argument step 3 write your argumentative essay following this format introduction body and conclusion so again this is the issue the public display industry keeps many species of marine mammals captive in concrete tanks especially whales and dolphins so this is how the introduction was presented by the writer there is no doubt that marine mammals should not be held in captivity they are a part of nature and should not be bought sold or thrown in an aquarium marine mammals have the right to be kept in their natural environment the sentence in red is the claim or thesis statement this is the stand of the writer so for him marine mammals should be kept in their natural environment for the body he presented a list of evidence to support his claim the first reason is highlighted in blue followed by the supporting details captivity causes many health problems in marine mammals many tanks have water full of chemicals and bacteria this results to blindness and many skin problems in dolphins and other marine mammals marine mammals in captivity die from pneumonia ulcers and other stress-related diseases most of these helpless creatures suffer from boredom dolphins in the wild can swim up to 40 to 100 miles per day but in pools they go around swimming repetitive patterns due to boredom and limited space many dolphins abuse themselves they often bang their heads against tank and aquarium walls reason 2 in addition some of these poor innocent creatures face abusive treatment by their caretakers thus shortening their lifespan in fact keiko the killer whale star of free willy was a victim of this type of abuse it was known to be said that he was 1000 pounds underweight and developed a wart-like disease his teeth were ground down chewing the sides of the pool due to boredom and he also had a problem with his dorsal fin reason 3 marine mammals also breed very poorly in captivity with very high infant death rates for this reason when a baby dolphin is born into captivity its birth is usually kept a secret from its mother until it shows signs of survival marine mammals do breed in captivity but the birth rate in captivity is not as successful as in the wild here we are now at the counter claim or opposing argument and of course the rebuttal or the defense let me read on the contrary some people think that holding animals in captivity helps in study and research so this is the counter claim but the truth is scientists prefer to learn about animals in their natural environment so they get first-hand knowledge while this sentence is the rebuttal and lastly here is how the writer of the conclusion [Music] in conclusion marine mammals should definitely not be held in captivity mahatma gandhi once said the greatness of a nation and its moral process can be measured by the way its animals are treated in a world where much of nature in the wild has already been lost it is up to us to let this beautiful marine mammals free the conclusion consists of three elements the sentence in red is a statement of the writer's claim or opinion it was then followed by a direct quotation from mahatma gandhi and the last sentence in blue is a call to action it is a challenge for the readers to act and help these mammals be freed from captivity so did you learn something today if you want more of this video 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