Lecture Notes: Can a Ray Have Flaws?

Introduction to Character Flaws

• Authors often struggle with incorporating flaws into their main characters.
• Adding flaws is seen as a rite of passage for writers as it adds depth to characters.
• Perfect characters, often termed as "Mary Sues," are criticized for lack of meaningful flaws.

The Nature of Mary Sues

• Mary Sues are typically devoid of significant flaws, not necessarily any flaws.
• They often break the universe's rules to suit their needs.
• TV Tropes describes them as characters around whom the universe bends, often resulting from poor or inexperienced writing.

Traits of Mary Sues

1. Prodigy Status: Characters like Lieutenant Mary Sue in "A Trekkie's Tale" become top officers unrealistically young.
2. Universal Attractiveness: They draw admiration effortlessly from other characters, warping established personalities.
3. Lack of Meaningful Flaws: Any flaws present are either fake or informed, having no bearing on the narrative.

Examples and Analysis

"A Trekkie's Tale"

• Parodies Mary Sue traits with an example of unrealistic achievements and universal attraction.

Real-world Example: Rey from Star Wars

• Rey is cited as a cinematic Mary Sue, lacking significant flaws.
• Her supposed flaws (impulsiveness, obsession with identity) do not hinder her progress, often leading to rewards.

What Constitutes a Meaningful Flaw?

• Significant flaws impact the narrative, presenting obstacles in the character's journey.
• Characters must overcome these flaws to achieve their goals, e.g., Macbeth's ambition or Anakin Skywalker's hubris.

Constructive Critique: Enhancing Rey's Character

• Suggests making Rey's impulsive nature a true flaw by having it cause significant setbacks or challenges reflective of her actions.
• Proposes narrative changes to illustrate Rey's impulsiveness as a hindrance rather than a benefit.

Conclusion on Mary Sues

• Mary Sues can have flaws, but often lack meaningful ones that affect the narrative.
• Quality of writing and character development is crucial; fundamentals matter for impactful storytelling.
• Cites Bruce Lee on the importance of mastering fundamentals.

Takeaway

• Effective character writing involves balancing strengths and flaws to create compelling, relatable narratives.
• Understanding and applying the basics of storytelling is essential to avoid creating Mary Sue characters.