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Mastering the Intro Funnel Technique

Apr 12, 2025

Writing an Effective Introduction: The Intro Funnel Method

Overview

  • Many students struggle with writing introductions for their essays.
  • The "intro funnel" technique helps in structuring an introduction effectively.
  • An introduction starts general and narrows down to a specific point: the thesis.

Structure of the Intro Funnel

1. The Hook

  • Position: Widest part of the funnel
  • Purpose: To capture the reader's interest with a general statement or quote.

2. Transition Sentences

  • Position: Middle of the funnel
  • Purpose: Sentences become progressively more specific, linking the hook to the thesis.
    • Can mention the book or article the essay is about.

3. The Thesis

  • Position: Narrowest part of the funnel
  • Purpose: To present the main argument or point of the paper.

Example Breakdown

Thesis Statement

"Beyonce's video for 'Single Ladies (Put a Ring on It)' is one of the best videos of all time because it is well-crafted and has a very unique style."

Step-by-Step Introduction

1. Hook

  • Statement: "People today still talk about the events that occurred during MTV's Video Music Awards in 2009."
    • Purpose: A broad opening statement introducing the context of music videos and the year.

2. Transitional Sentences

  • First Transition: "Many talented artists were nominated for best female video that year, including Taylor Swift for 'You Belong with Me' and Beyonce for 'Single Ladies (Put a Ring on It)."
    • Purpose: Introduces the reader to Beyonce and her video, linking to the thesis.
  • Second Transition: "Taylor Swift ultimately won the award and as she gave her victory speech, Kanye West interrupted her arguing that Beyonce had one of the best videos of all time."
    • Purpose: Introduces the argument about the video's quality.

3. Narrow Statement

  • Statement: "Kanye West's claim is valid."
    • Purpose: Clearly states the author's stance, leading to the thesis.

Conclusion

  • The introduction should smoothly transition from a general context to a specific thesis.
  • More sentences can be added or removed, but the focus should be on gradually narrowing the topic.

Final Note

  • Use this funnel method to write more structured and engaging introductions.
  • Good luck with writing your introduction!

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