a sunny Tuesday okay so uh hi hi hi I would like to recognize first the viewers who were able to tune in early uh Marianne L Rivera and Mary joyape we also have Jamila pasir in subscribe and it's Tuesday it's definitely another exciting day for us to uh in the exploration of course of creative writing okay so before we start I would like to have a quick shout out of uh this faculty and staff of San Mariano National High School headed of course by our OIC Mama Josephine good afternoon and of course so all our uh dear senior high school learners from all over the Philippines Luzon visayas and Mindanao hello and join me as we again discover another lessons activities in the world of creativity of course here in our Japan it's like online tutorial okay so uh we are already in our victory in our creative writing and today we'll be focusing ourselves on uh creative uh writing specifically on writing a short poem applying various elements and literary devices and Innovative techniques okay so again this is a shooter Jerry and before we start of course I would like you I mean I'm encouraging everyone to please click the share button so that we'll be able to share knowledge to others via our Facebook through that Tech unit and the depth at dial okay circuit although I am excited to uh have here him today foreign schedules hectic schedules but then of course uh I'm hoping that during our next session we will be able to join us okay excited because circuit is okay so uh after driving through this module my dear senior high school learners you are expected to write a short poem applying the various elements and literary devices exploring Innovative techniques okay hello Maurice kilan laureline artist bakai from National High School hello hello uh we also have Jamie Larry and Chetek as a wife you learn samueller San Mariana National High School hello okay so uh moving on as early as now I would like to give you the challenge uh some of you were not able to join the challenge last week and so we are encouraging everybody to please join with the challenge of the weeks I think creative writing I recognized during our session every Tuesday at 4 40 in the afternoon so for the challenge of the week you ought to write a four-line poem using a mix of figurative language and then the top three forms will be featured in The Next Episode once again and then the last one is you are to add your picture and use the hashtag it's like creative writing and post your poem on your walls so once again this is the challenge of the week okay hopefully and then you will you will be recognized next week okay now moving on you guys have a quick review on what transpires last Tuesday we know I know we have an exciting discussion last Tuesday but then some of you were not able to uh cope with our session and this is the reason why we have to have this earthquakes review okay so last time we've talked about poetry and its elements okay so when we say poetry it's a certain art form that uses language in order for us to express our feelings and emotions using elements and literary devices okay and for the elements we have this class also two of the manage the many elements that we have and those are the sound and repetition sound it means the musicalities and the repetitions that includes the following Okay so we've discussed about rhyme and then the rhyme scheme which is uh we label the the ending of the word the end words of its line according to the alphabet's letter so last time a a b b a b a b and those are what we call as rhyme scheme and of course they are under right okay was a repetition we have the following alliteration consonants and assonance I hope because this particular literary devices and elements are very important of course in writing at the same time in speaking especially if you are fans of uh writing poems and speaking in front of a lot of audiences okay so yeah so hello hi Lawrence hi Angelica adoria and then Jessica Velasco we also have Bobby miles Pascual benzo all from San Mariano National High School and we also have John Grayson rivano watching from ayaba City hello and I'm glad that you are here joining us to read our session today okay you know we uh we're going to move now through the activity the first activity of today's lesson and that is okay you are to compare the following images and then you have to write down your observations on the comment section so I'm going fast two images and then so that I could recognize that I would be able to read your answers okay so comparison of two images the first picture is this it's actually sunflowers a farm and then we also have the picture B which is this one now if you are going to compare these two pictures but comparison or what observation would you make so yeah I'm giving you 30 seconds and then Jocelyn buraga magawai Aro De La Cruz what what is your observation about the two pictures presented okay the first picture is the picture is colorful picture a is colorful according to uh Lewis Dale dumano and then the speaker B is not okay so that's her observation the first picture is colorful while the other is not what about the others okay A has a different colors while B is monochromatic is a monochromatic one wow okay according to Edison beginner uh the picture a is uh looks it looks dead picture B looks dead while picture a has full of Scholars okay I'm happy that you are of course uh participating interacting okay so definitely the picture a predicts a lively image while the other one is somewhat's done or other than that we could say that picture a brings good vibe while picture B uh does not bring it brings negativities okay so hello April from uh now for the next activity we have image right now you are to compare the following homes okay based on their construction okay again you're going to write down your observations on the comment section see do it as quick as possible okay so we have room a and then Form B Salam it's a read poem Aya the sky is blue the Sun is bright the fields are green the river is called okay so that is for po a I want you to give your observation regarding these two pose okay for pombi the sky is an Azure canvas of the Sun a king with golden rubs the fields bow down low and anxious while the river hit its precious Strokes now what can you say about this polish what what comparisons could you make out of this too yeah well read some of your comments according to Miss Campbell my mama Google that is about the image okay what about the poem a and the phone B right now but that definitely we could read all of your answers later on so according to Jesse Erin Dizon the poem a is short while Bombi is longer and more detailed okay that's a good observation while we also have here is it's somewhat has equality okay you have a good observation also okay okay so both are poles right now the differences between these two is that phone B users a lot of detailed uh pictures for it to uh securely deliver the the meaning of the poem while young poem it's more on directly written that's uh just like the first image the second image the image b a while ago in which has a lot of colors a has a hidden detail [Music] while uh poem B it's I know home a is more simpler while Bombi is detailed okay so you're not now uh going back to the first uh image a while ago it has followers the same thing with this poem B it has a lot of ingredients and it makes of course the readers too easily in the hand I understand what the writer has or what the writers what the writer is trying to uh about the things he's uh seeing around him it's it's good to know that uh if we're going to write of course we have to write any insert any inject number of words right because if it's directly it's directly written not getting important Masterpiece and of course uh we can be uh uh what they call this we can actually write poems with this qualities through a certain element through a certain literary device in which we are about to discuss and that is of course about figures of it's okay I know and I believe is already uh popular or had already known about figures of speech because of course discussion when we are in our Junior High School about figures of speech but then the most common one sweets are simile metaphor and personification right but then today of course we'll not be dealing with those three we'll be dealing with the the Muslim common The Uncommon uh figures and speechs para saganon you can add uh you can add them in your in your writings okay so yeah okay just comment down just uh write down your answers your observations regarding that the questions to be thrown to you in uh the comment section okay it's again now so when we say figures of speech these are tools that writers use to create images or paint pictures these pictures have convey the meaning faster and more vividly than words alone okay with the uh poem be a while ago foreign it has a lot of bit words with spin pictures and those words are actually figurative language okay so as I've said a while ago we'll be discussing the uncommon figures of spirits okay and those are the following we have hyperball irony and this is anaphora apostrophe uh euphemism onomatopoeia and oxymorons okay foreign so yeah now let's uh have a discussion of it's one by one okay so the first one is hyperbole it's a term which uses exaggeration to add dramatic meaning to the sentence so your cue here is uh exaggeration okay exaggeration so hyperball is exaggeration okay now we have a given example here okay it's written in sentence and then later on in your example on how it's used in uh at home okay it's again now to give an example is I'm so hungry I could eat a horse by the sentence by that statement alone it's already an exaggeration right it's exaggerated by and by I'm going to look at my letter because it's where the comment section is okay so this is somewhat an a good example of high purple now let's try to see if how uh hyperball is really used in a bowl now we have here a poem written by Ralph Waldo Emerson it's entitled Concord him okay by the road bridge that are the flag they're flagged to April Breeze and Pearl here once the embattled farmer stood and fired the shot heard ground to work so the highlights and word are the highlighted sentence here which is a line for is considered an a hyperboard why because it's somewhat exaggerated okay so that is how easy produce or how to create an example of a hyperboard now what about the examples would you mind to give your examples of the hyperbole we have here brunes who is watching we also have Maria Elisa May anes from San Mariano National High School hello okay yes now another example is I slept like a wrap on Mount Apple last night isn't it exaggerated if yes then definitely it falls under hyperboy okay foreign okay so we have now the second one which is irony and when we say irony it's a statement with some base the opposite meaning of what is literary literally said exaggeration this time it's uh the opposite meaning okay so we have here a good example after looking at the students four this is for the teacher says you will surely finish the year with highest honors isn't it ironic so uh again it will be falling under irony so yeah now let's look at a good example and how it's used in a bone okay uh this was written by Samuel Taylor coleridgeman rhyme of the Ancient Mariner okay now listen water water everywhere and all the birds did straight water water everywhere and not a drop to drink okay so the ironic here the irony here is found in the third and last line which is water water everywhere water can be seen everywhere but then uh you know okay so it's a it's an irony it's ironic it's an opposite uh statement okay and of course when we say opposite statement it's an irony okay which is okay so we have now the antithesis when we say antithesis it's applying uh just a just a position of ideas winter contrasting in a statement that is balanced irony is an opposite statement contrasting statement then pero it's balance now let's try to see the examples okay many are called but few are chosen okay the word many and the few is fantastic pero the statement is balance okay say yeah so hello Dirk I Joseph and Guzman NJ analy Gonzalez okay we have here the hide and the panther okay by John Breeden so it says here to that for heaven and you're too wide for help to have an above and to their prince belongs okay so we have here black and white Heaven and Hell Above and Below okay so therefore they are contrasting but then uh depends a statement although they are contrasting and we call those as antithesis okay so I hope now now moving on we have here another example on pitches the sweet star experiences of Light by sharan okay I value the light because I've experienced the darkness I value the joys because I have experienced the sorrows you see the construction light and then melancholian Darkness it's a fantastic contrasting statement contradictory statement but then it's balance on how it was written and then we also have Joys and then sorrows I hope you like it now hello later on now moving on we have anaphora and when we say anaphora it's when a word is repeated multiple times within a phrase your clue here is repeated multiple times within a phrase just like to give an example we have I'm awake I'm strong I'm ready okay it's again now the words being uh repeated here is the actually the beginning where it switches I am I am and then I am Celeste okay yeah now how it is used in a home because actually or uh the later part the latter Parts uh your own poem you sing uh the following literary devices specifically your figures of spirits okay sonnet 66 by William Shakespeare tired with all this for restful that I try has to behold desert and beggar born and maybe nothing cream didn't jaldi and purest fade and gilded and made a okay the word and and is being repeated therefore it falls under Anaconda okay so we already have four um I would like to finish it okay we now have apostrophe it's a direct address either it's an absent person or to a non-humanity non-human entity it's just like personification so we have the example I know you know the song Hey Hey set me a free stupid stupid stop picking on me at the back say yeah so the stupid is being addressed here in the given example it's a non-human entity okay it's upon the man uh it's written by John Doon it's entitled death be not proud I wondered only as as a child manga apostrophe okay if you're going to look and try to read that certain book so here we have that be not proud those some have called The Mighty and dreadful for thou are not so so we are directly addressing that here and it's a non-human entity therefore it falls under a phosphere okay if you have comments if you have anything to say you would uh just address me by the inbox that we had the the chat box the comment section okay so next we have euphemism it's the substitution of a mild or vague expression for a horse or unpleasant one but um we have here some of the examples okay so instead of saying well fed i instead of saying over with you say welfare uh you're overweight well in fact all right so euphemism now we also have here breakwin okay instead of saying past guard a pass gas or part so instead of saying uh imported or you you just have to say break really I just have to have my breakfast or uh uh instead of fire right okay now if you have any examples if you have your own examples you're free to uh type your uh examples in the comment section please okay so we also have embarking on a journey of self-discovery instead of jobless jobless but then when you say that he or she is embarking a majority of self-discovery that is all right so yeah now let's have the examples in the pool it's written by Hub hiccup about hiccup when I said I have to lay you off a parallel universe was born in his face one reflex is a blue shirt taken to the river and beaten against the rats okay the word lay off instead of saying you are fired okay you just have to say uh he or she is winning off okay I have to lay you off I have to fire you it's okay instead of saying I have the fiery I have to lay you off okay so that is information all right so then uh dimple Zacharias from schools okay we also have Zarina Vargas now we have here my favorite one it is my favorite to onomatopoeia it's the sound of nature actually and it's the use of words that imitates The Sounds associated with the objects or actions they refer to okay so we have the moving of the cows and the resting of the palette remind me of home so Association okay so you have now the sound of natures now you have here we give an example writing a running water by Lee Ahmed uh join me as I read from president water Flaps in Japan split Splash downhill wear bling magpies in three freely melodic tree whoosh passing the breeze flag splatter and flap from Crocs Birds whistles bubbling bubbles from that so you have the a lot of onomatopoeia here split splash the world in the woods the buzzing of the beers those are okay uh you have you're free to give your own examples here okay I'm encouraging everybody to give their own examples in the comment section yeah now moving on we have also oxymoron is apparently contradictory terms that are combined to produce a special effects we have the antithesis and then the oxymoron we also have a contradictory terms here but then they are combined or oxim now we have the following examples do you have the original copies that we requested now see you have the original copies it's a contradict contradictory terms original and then copies aside we also have this is this is a genuine imitation Rolex watch okay so genuine and then imitation it's a contradictory terms they couldn't wait to get out alone together okay alone and then together all those three falls under simulant all right say that so we have another example here of I know similar news in a poem deceiving ourselves by Brenda are let's on a market night our eyes perceive a full moon hiding behind the clouds deceiving us with a false true okay so we have here false truth is a combined terms but they are actually contradictory and definitely they fall under oxymoron okay so I hope speech and common unfamiliar figures of speech they will be useful to you when you are going to write your own Masterpiece especially in a poem or a song okay now it's your turn so we're clear the given Direction in exactly in 40 minutes the following statements use figures of speech you're going to write the correct one and drop your answers on the comment section as well as in your answer sheets okay so please do answer it as quick as possible so we have number one he drove faster than a speeding LRT is it a irony B of Cimarron C hyperball or D antithesis what's your answer please comment in the comment section and we also have here dim called the Arias uh I yeah he's already writing her answers regarding the activities a while ago answered C hyperball about the first one today we also have here Jermaine also answered C hyperball Aliyah C let's try to look at the correct answer here okay for the first one we have it's letter C okay so definitely it's letter c okay so I think all of you got the correct answer according to the comment section comment sections feedback okay so let's have number two I could hear their buzzing so I knew there was a base not a business around here somewhere okay again I could hear their buzzing so I know there was a beast Nest around here summer is it a anaphora uh B apostrophe C onomatopoeia or D oxymoron what's your answer this key in your answers in the comment section okay uh Germany answered C what else to get we also uh nestling answered C onomatopoeia also answered C Chloe Flores answers C also and then so yeah let's see if your answer is are correct um uh she answered days okay so 99.9 percent and that's good okay so we now move to the number three you are clearly confused by the situation you have found yourself in okay the underlying word here is clearly confused is it irony is it on simran is it euphemism or is it anaphora okay your answer is please okay some answers see what about the rest okay so now for number three we have um Edison answer B of C morons what about the others it's actually letter B okay I hope you get it yeah it's all B for number four we have I will go I will do I will succeed okay so what should be the proper figurative language here is it anticipant apostrophe or anaphora for number three okay key in your answers please and I know you are all correct so according to Edison it's anaphora according to missiba is also the anaphora foreign yeah so moving on we have the last one last one I like Smugglers they are the only honest themes okay we have the following choices and Cimarron irony antithesis or anaphora I like smackders they are the only anastives I I think the uh supposed to be underlined word here is Anise steps okay so what's your answer it's letter so some answers letter B I really we also have answers here from Mrs it's letter d according to Chloe it's letter B also the Lester glutas letter D let's see let's uh let's see the answer it's actually letter A it's an oxymoron okay so senior high school learners today now what about finding figures of speech in a poem just a quick one just try to identify I know um figurative language the size of the Sun appears in the shorts away more than a ton a pizza too massive to pick up and toast a pizza wrapless uh resplendent with oceans and Souls of souls I'm tapping my pizza with mountains of cheese with Acres of peppers pimentos and peas with mushroom tomatoes and sauces Galore with every last ogre they had at the store so just a quick one is it euphemism irony of Cimarron onomatopoeia what wow so they imagine hyperbole yeah actually absolutely is hyperbole and anaphora okay so senior high school learners things okay so again I would like to remind you of the challenge of the week which is to write a four-line poem using a mix of figurative language the top three poems will be featured in The Next Episode and you have to add your picture so that you will be recognized and use the hashtag it's like creative writing and post your poem on your walls okay so we're inspecting your outputs from uh this very after this session until of course I mean PowerPoint okay so Ally participation and if you have questions you're free to message me via Facebook uh marpus or my email jerrycell.orpoise.gov.ph again if you have questions if you wanted to have a clearer understanding of the lesson unit s and see you again next Tuesday this is your Twitter Jerry signing off once again