Essay Writing: Conclusion Paragraph

Overview

• This is part three of a four-part series on essay writing.
• Focus on crafting the conclusion paragraph.

Key Elements of a Conclusion Paragraph

1. Review the Thesis Statement

   • Use the first sentence to review the main idea of the thesis.
   • Avoid repeating the same words; paraphrase instead.

2. Review Body Paragraphs

   • Use the middle sentences to summarize the topic sentences of the body paragraphs.
   • Slightly alter the wording from the body paragraphs.

3. Provide a Result, Consequence, or Recommendation

   • The final sentence should reflect a result, consequence, or recommendation tied to the thesis.
   • It should synthesize all discussed ideas into a cohesive conclusion.

Example Structure

• First Sentence: Reviews thesis

  • "Walking is an ideal exercise."
  • Reflects the thesis: "The best type of exercise is walking."

• Second Sentence: Recalls first body paragraph's idea

  • "It is easier than many other sports."
  • Reflects that walking is easy.

• Third Sentence: Recalls second body paragraph's idea

  • "It is also more convenient than many other activities."
  • Reflects that walking is convenient.

• Fourth Sentence: Recalls third body paragraph's idea

  • "Walking is usually done outside which helps people feel happy and less stressed."
  • Reflects the benefits of walking outside.

• Final Sentence: Offers a recommendation

  • "Everyone who wants regular exercise should try walking."
  • Synthesizes all key ideas without repetition.

Next Steps

• The upcoming video will focus on editing essays and adding transitions within paragraphs.