Overview
This session introduces key strategies for writing compelling application essays for BYU, focusing on brainstorming, authenticity, structure, and effective storytelling.
Importance of the BYU Essay
- The essay is a critical part of BYU’s holistic admissions review, beyond test scores and GPA.
- Essays allow applicants to share unique stories, experiences, and perspectives.
Brainstorming and Topic Selection
- Begin early with broad brainstorming before narrowing down to a specific topic.
- Choose experiences that highlight personal growth, resilience, or core values.
- Avoid clichés; instead, focus on genuine experiences unique to you.
Structure and Storytelling
- Use a clear structure: introduction, body, and conclusion.
- Start with a compelling hook or opening anecdote to engage the reader.
- Show growth or change over time, not just a description of events.
- Use specific details and vivid language to create a memorable narrative.
Authenticity and Voice
- Write in your authentic voice; don’t try to sound like someone else.
- Reflect honestly on failures, challenges, or doubts, and what you learned.
- Admissions prefers vulnerability and honesty over perfection.
Editing and Feedback
- Revise essays multiple times to improve clarity and impact.
- Seek feedback from trusted mentors, but ensure the final essay is your own work.
- Proofread for grammar, spelling, and flow.
Common Mistakes to Avoid
- Don’t repeat information already listed on your application or resume.
- Avoid generic statements and overused themes.
- Don’t exceed word limits or ignore prompt guidelines.
Key Terms & Definitions
- Holistic Review — An admissions process considering multiple aspects (academics, essays, extracurriculars) of an applicant.
- Hook — An engaging opening sentence or story that draws in the reader.
Action Items / Next Steps
- Begin brainstorming essay topics this week.
- Draft a rough version of your BYU essay.
- Ask a mentor or teacher for initial feedback on your draft.
- Revise your essay for authenticity and clarity before the next session.