Language Paper One Summary
Introduction
- Focus on question two, the language question worth 8 marks.
- Key question format: "How does the writer use language to describe X?"
- Allotted time: 10 minutes (13 minutes with extra time).
Key Language Techniques
- Metaphor: Saying something is something else (e.g., "time is a thief").
- Simile: Comparing something using "like" or "as" (e.g., "fast as lightning").
- Personification: Giving human qualities to non-human things (e.g., "the wind whispered").
Answer Structure: PETA ETA Z
- PETA: Point, Evidence, Technique, Analysis.
- Repeat this in two paragraphs for question two.
- Importance of providing structured responses with examples and analysis.
Avoiding Common Mistakes
- Avoid "technique spotting"; instead, explain effects in detail.
- Use well-chosen techniques and explain their impact on the reader.
Question Three: Structure
- Also worth 8 marks, asks how text is structured to interest the reader.
- Focus on structure, not language, using techniques like:
- Shifts in Focus: From big picture to small detail.
- Cyclical Structure: Ending mirrors the beginning.
- Shift in Perspective/Time: Changes in viewpoint or time.
Explaining Effects
- Avoid stating techniques without explaining their effects.
- Always ask "why here, why now?" to explain structural choices and their impact.
Question Four: Evaluation
- Evaluate a student's opinion on the text.
- Use tentative language (e.g., "may suggest," "could imply") to show alternative interpretations.
- Primarily agree with the given statement but allow for slight disagreement.
Mistakes to Avoid
- Avoid vague claims without explanation (e.g., "the writer definitely shows...")
- Use tentative language and evaluate the effectiveness of techniques.
Creative Writing
- Recommended to start with this question as it's worth 50% of the paper.
- Description vs. Story:
- Description: Focus on one moment, uses five senses.
- Story: Includes plot, characters, and a problem.
- Pre-write creative writing and adapt in the exam.
Writing Techniques
- Controlled Structure: Particularly important for stories.
- Sentence Variety: Use a mix of long and short sentences/paragraphs.
- Purposeful Vocabulary: Use impressive words naturally and for effect.
Avoiding Common Creative Writing Mistakes
- Avoid unfocused or overly long pieces.
- Focus on one key moment or emotion.
- Plan a simple structure using detailed imagery and strong emotion.
Final Reminders
- Zoom in on keywords in question two.
- Stay focused on the extract in question four.
- Plan briefly for creative writing.
- Quality over quantity in all responses.
These notes capture the key aspects of the language paper one and provide a structured approach to each question, focusing on analysis, structure, and creative writing techniques.