How to Write a Donation Letter

Jul 23, 2024

How to Write a Donation Letter

Key Elements of a Donation Letter

  1. Header
    • Include non-profit's name and branded logo (if available).
  2. Contact Information
    • Include physical address and phone number.
    • Listing a contact person; non-profit website and email address are optional.
  3. Donor Salutation
    • Address the donor by their preferred name (formal/informal).
  4. Non-Profit Story
    • The hook that connects the reader emotionally to the mission.
  5. Call to Action
    • Clear and direct call to action outlining exactly what you want from the reader.
  6. Thank and Sign
    • Thank the recipient and choose an employee, board member, or key volunteer to sign.
    • Promotes a human-to-human connection.

Writing Your Story

  • Need:
    • Describe the problem you aim to solve.
    • Focus on who or what is in need; be descriptive.
    • Use images or statistics.
  • Solution:
    • Describe what your organization does to address the need.
    • Explain the ideal result and how the problem is solved/prevented.
  • Hero:
    • Position the donor as the hero of the story.
    • Mention how their support enables change.

Example: Feeding America

  • Need:
    • Hunger in America affects over 50 million people (1 in 6 of the U.S. population).
    • Includes more than 1 in 5 children.
  • Solution:
    • Get nourishing food from farmers, manufacturers, and retailers to people in need.
    • Building a path to a food-secure future.
  • Hero:
    • Monthly donors create a reliable funding source.
    • Each dollar provides at least 10 meals to families in need.

Example: World Wildlife Fund Email

  • Need:
    • Context about the issue (e.g., snow leopards).
    • Detailed in the header image and the first paragraph.
  • Solution:
    • Provided in the final paragraph and through links.
    • Keeps the message short and engaging.
  • Hero:
    • Reader's name is mentioned, emphasizing their role in creating change.
    • Clear long-term goal (e.g., protecting nature).

Best Practices

  1. Friendly Tone
    • Write as you would speak to a friend.
    • Avoid internal lingo and jargon.
  2. Authenticity & Human Touch
    • Use a real signature and include headshots.
  3. Offer Alternatives
    • Options beyond monetary donations (e.g., volunteering, sharing on social media).
  4. Ease of Contribution
    • Make it clear and easy for potential donors to contribute.
    • Use large, standout call-to-action buttons.
  5. Track Data
    • Record response rates and improve future letters.
    • Email automation tools can help (e.g., Mailchimp, Wild Apricot).

Resources

  • Donation letter templates provided in the video description.
  • Free email automation tool suggestion: Wild Apricot.