Feedback on Case Study Presentation

General Observations

• The case study is very lengthy and it's hard to follow the storytelling.
• Everything included should be intentional; avoid adding elements just for the sake of completeness.
• There is a need for better organization and possible padding between sections to improve visual appeal.
• Consider creating an appendix for additional information and design artifacts.

Project Overview

• Clearly state what the project is about and your contributions.
• For redesign projects, show before-and-after images for clarity.
• The issue and design challenges were well laid out but could be more concise.