Lecture Notes on Essay Writing: Body Paragraph on Technology

Introduction

• Continuation of a task on writing an essay on technology.
• Emphasis on writing the first body paragraph.
• Essay theme: technology's impact on human essence.
• Thesis: Technology has immense potential but won't change human essence unless it affects fundamental human experiences (thinking, feeling).

Thesis Development

• Debate on what defines being human: body, mind, or a combination.
• Thesis: Technology won't redefine humanity unless it changes core human attributes.

Body Paragraph Focus

• Technology's role in changing social structures, particularly in the Western world.
• Historical context: Industrial Revolution as a catalyst for societal change.

Writing the Paragraph

Topic Sentence

• Technology fundamentally changes the world and social structures.
• Deep integration into daily life, enhancing productivity and altering social relations.

Example: Industrial Revolution

• Marked significant societal shifts in Western societies.
• Shift from rural to urban living.
• Steam engine as a pivotal invention.
• Expansion of trade and social circles.

Analysis

• Contemporary Western societies heavily reliant on technology.
• Technology aids tasks from communication to advanced biotechnology.
• Counterargument: Dependency varies by region and political freedom.

Cultural Sensitivity

• Discussion on industrialization in non-Western societies like China.
• Acknowledges industrialization's global relevance, even in communist countries.
• Importance of accuracy and sensitivity in statements.

Conclusion

• Personal habits, like sleeping next to phones, illustrate technology's influence.
• Linking sentence to next paragraph: Will technology change human essence?

Essay Structure

• Following a simple PEEL structure (Point, Example, Explanation, Link).
• Next paragraph to explore technology's limits in altering human essence.

Reflection and Discussion

• Encouragement to analyze assumptions and maintain accuracy.
• Invitation to provide feedback on essay content and structure.

Additional Information

• Mention of an online course for further essay writing support.
• Engagement with the audience for feedback and suggestions.