Writing a Task B Essay - Part 4: The Third Paragraph

Introduction

• Part four of a series on writing a Task B essay.
• Focus on the third paragraph of the essay.
• Previous parts covered prompt analysis, introduction, and first two paragraphs.

Background

• Host: Kate Robson, scored 80 in Section 2 of the GAMSAT.
• Aim: To help others achieve similar scores by sharing insights and writing techniques.

Topic of Essay

• Essay on "beauty," with a shift towards "the power of nature."
• Initial paragraphs focused on nature's beauty and its connection to humans.

Objectives for the Third Paragraph

• Highlight the importance of appreciating nature, especially in urban settings.
• Contemplate using examples from COVID-19 or Indigenous Australian culture.
• Link personal lessons to broader societal themes.

Structure and Style

• Writing style is personal but seeks to connect to larger issues.
• Use of "PEEL" paragraph structure:
  • Point: Introduce the main idea.
  • Evidence: Provide examples or illustrations.
  • Explanation: Explain how the evidence supports the point.
  • Link: Connect to broader themes or the next point.

Key Points of the Paragraph

• Modern western societies often overlook nature due to capitalism and greed.
• Importance of slowing down and connecting with nature.
• Use of Australian Indigenous culture as an example:
  • Connection between humans and nature.
  • Significance of "The Dreamtime" and its stories.
• Critique of Western culture's lack of integration of Indigenous teachings.
• Potential healing benefits of incorporating Indigenous culture.
• Discussion of multicultural identity and the absence of a unified national culture.

Challenges and Reflections

• Author expresses difficulty in clearly conveying their argument.
• Feels emotional about the topic, especially the historical context of colonialism.

Conclusion

• Acknowledges complexities in integrating Indigenous culture into Western society.
• Importance of addressing racism and discrimination.
• Calls for a respectful incorporation of Indigenous teachings for healing.

Next Steps

• Plans to finish the essay in the following week.
• Encourages feedback from viewers.
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